... Never let me draw after a blood test. Ever. Gene doesn't look like Gene, Alex looks a little bit like Alex (which I have an excuse for. I'm not used to drawing women. Sothere. >> ) But... PETER LOOKS LIKE PETER. Yaaay. I did something right today.
Anyway, there are my little side comments. o3o I'll link to the others in a bit. I'm just a bit lazy right now.
Oh, and the nurse is off-screen. >> Just didn't feel like drawing the funny nurse hats. xP
I'm not sure if this can be helped for the moment, maybe something to think about in the future, but I feel like the top part reads oddly. From left to right I'm reading Alex's purple script and then I hit the "wait who else" when I was actually supposed to reading the blurb to the right first.
Also if the nurse is off screen there needs to be SOME sort of indication, either the characters themselves are making some sort offhand comment/thought about the nurse or you have an arrow pointing that says "nurse". Otherwise no one but you really knows who'se talking XD
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Also if the nurse is off screen there needs to be SOME sort of indication, either the characters themselves are making some sort offhand comment/thought about the nurse or you have an arrow pointing that says "nurse". Otherwise no one but you really knows who'se talking XD
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